All of us have dreamed of visiting a foreing country atleast once in their life, in my opinion. In fact some of us can think of visiting the whole word. I want to visit a few country for some reasons. For instance I would like to visit Egypt to see
Pyramids, Italy to see the architect, Venice to see and get in gondola… However; I want to see especially Malansia, because my uncle has lived there for two years and I interested in what he says about there, I see its beauty on television and because I wonder its complicated culture.
My uncle has lived Malansia for two years. I heard his really interesting experiences.For instance when you go a restaurant in Chinese neighbourhood, you choose the thing you want to eat from an aquarium when it is alive and after a while it is served as well cooked. You can meet very different people in this country because it is multi-cultural.
Malansia has a tropical climate which means that it is covered with green. I see its beauty on tv. The ocean with every shade of blue and the green of course. There is no winter as in Ankara. As a person who doesn’t like winter I want to go there. In terms of its spectacle, I should also state that the highest towers in the world are in Malansia. They are worth to see, in my opinion.
There are lots of people all over the world in Malansia. There is no suprise to see a person eating a cockroach on the street.I would like to see how lots of different culture makes a new different culture.
If I had a chance I would go Malansia. I hope it won’t be just a dream. Although I will not see some parts of the world, I hope I can see at least one place I want.
Pyramids, Italy to see the architect, Venice to see and get in gondola… However; I want to see especially Malansia, because my uncle has lived there for two years and I interested in what he says about there, I see its beauty on television and because I wonder its complicated culture.
My uncle has lived Malansia for two years. I heard his really interesting experiences.For instance when you go a restaurant in Chinese neighbourhood, you choose the thing you want to eat from an aquarium when it is alive and after a while it is served as well cooked. You can meet very different people in this country because it is multi-cultural.
Malansia has a tropical climate which means that it is covered with green. I see its beauty on tv. The ocean with every shade of blue and the green of course. There is no winter as in Ankara. As a person who doesn’t like winter I want to go there. In terms of its spectacle, I should also state that the highest towers in the world are in Malansia. They are worth to see, in my opinion.
There are lots of people all over the world in Malansia. There is no suprise to see a person eating a cockroach on the street.I would like to see how lots of different culture makes a new different culture.
If I had a chance I would go Malansia. I hope it won’t be just a dream. Although I will not see some parts of the world, I hope I can see at least one place I want.
First of all,I really enjoyed reading your essay.The introduction part is well organized and the thesis statement is clear.Topic sentences support the rest of the writing.The essay is well done in terms of coherence and unity.Conclusion part is fine.Thank you for your sharing:))
ReplyDeleteHi Nurgül, I liked your essay, it is well prepared. You settled your theses statement. Maybe your conclusion could involve the whole summary. For the last, I have a question: where is Malansia in Turkish? Thank you:)
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